Saturday, July 20, 2013
NOTE: I had a few writers reading THE HOPE STORE as "beta readers." Their feedback is very helpful because they are commenting on the whole new book and giving overall input as well as sometimes more detailed notes on the manuscript. I wanted to share some notes from one such reader, author Alison DeLuca who has written several fine steampunk novels. As you may know, this novel is about the first store to sell hope over the counter. Jada is the store's first customer and Luke is one of the store owners. Here are some of Alison's comments:
"Overall, The Hope Store really succeeded on several levels for me. First, I loved the actual story, with Jada and her own self-discovery -- as well as the future of the Hope Store. Those story arcs were balanced perfectly.
I felt a lot of connection to Jada, as well as to Luke. His revelations later in the book made him very human, from my POV. Kazu is also such a vivid, alive character. The Luke/Jada chapters were perfectly done, and I enjoyed the two different points of view. The green highlights are for sections that really nailed it – they stood out to me as well-written, and extremely interesting. I think you brought the book to a real, satisfying conclusion.
I also loved the style and poetry of your words. There were only a few phrases that seemed off or clichéd to me, and I pointed them out in the manuscript. The book is a fantastic follow-up to Prospect."
Sunday, June 23, 2013
I finished the book this evening. It is a fantastic story, filled with just enough twists and turns. But it's the insight into Jada's viewpoint that really makes the story work.
It is fascinating how it gets inside Jada's head, literally and figuratively.
(You probably don't know this but I spend about 1/2 my time doing MRI physics.
So I thought the fMRI part was pretty interesting.)
Many people will weep while they read the story, as they identify with Jada's issues.
Others will identify with Luke and the result of his living a lie.
Dwight I think you have an excellent story here.
Friday, March 1, 2013
Next, on March 12, I'll find out if my book advances on the basis of my 20 page excerpt. There will be 500 books left standing at that point. And the public is invited to go to -- www.amazon.com/abna -- to read for themselves any of the advancing excerpts! There's always quite a stunning variety of novels and voices on display.
Sunday, January 27, 2013
It's Monday, Jan 28. I am part of a large blogging event called the "Re-Introduce Myself" Blogfest where I get to introduce myself to new audiences. My name is Dwight Okita. I live in Chicago where I design websites and work at a nonprofit for the visually impaired. I just finished writing my second novel THE HOPE STORE and I've entered it in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Contest. You can learn more about the contest at www.amazon.com/abna
Below is the pitch for my book:
"We don't just instill hope. We install it."
That's the slogan for the first store in the world to sell hope over the counter.
Luke Nagano goes to sleep each night dreaming about hope and how to make more of it, ever since he lost his sister. He and his partner prepare the store for its grand opening. As media interest grows, an activist group called the Natural Hopers emerges with the mission to warn the public about the dangers of synthetically created hope. Though the store investors become rightly nervous, a steady stream of hope-enhanced customers begins to sing the store's praises.
When hopeless Jada Upshaw first hears of the Hope Store, she's outraged. She's wasted plenty of time and money on magic bullets that haven't worked. Jada sets out to expose the Hope Store for the fraud it must be -- but to do so she must have a hope installation herself. Jada's response to the installation forces her to change her plans dramatically, and to re-think the meaning of hope.
A TV station offers to present a town hall meeting about the controversial nature of enhanced hope in the new millennium, and Luke is tempted by this chance for big exposure -- but it means they'll have to face the Natural Hopers who can be loose cannons. Everything is at stake as this high-profile event could either signal the beginning or end of a global conversation on hope.
THE HOPE STORE tells a story of an unlikely friendship set in the near future, and the thorny relationships between science and faith, placebo and cure, hope and hype.
My first novel THE PROSPECT OF MY ARRIVAL was a finalist in the Amazon contest in 2008.
I look forward to meeting the other bloggers in this blogfest!
Friday, December 28, 2012
Well, this is an amazing photo of Big Ben. From last new year I think.
It's been a pretty good year. I got a cool part time job at Blind Service Association.
A Hollywood film producer treated me to steak dinner and we talked for two hours about possibilities.
I designed a website and video for an associate professor in Dubai.
My buddhist practice of chanting and daily prayers are more regular.
I've been making new friends, in town and out of town.
And I finished my second novel THE HOPE STORE. Below is the pitch for the book.
Feel free to write back and tell me about your 2012 year, or your hopes for 2013.
As any blogger knows, it's a lonely job blogging on the internet. So comments are great welcomed!
Here's my latest pitch for my novel for the Amazon contest:
"We don't just instill hope. We install it." That's the slogan for the first store in the world to sell hope over the counter. Luke Nagano goes to sleep each night dreaming about hope and how to make more of it, ever since he lost his sister. He and his partner prepare the store for its grand opening. As media interest grows, an activist group called the Natural Hopers emerges with the mission to alarm people about the dangers of synthetically created hope. Though the investors are rightly nervous, a stream of hope-enhanced customers begins to sing the store's praises.
When Jada Upshaw first hears of the store, she just laughs. She's wasted plenty of time on magic bullets that didn't work. She's a woman born without a breath of hope. Jada sets out to expose the Hope Store to be the fraud that it surely is -- but to do so she must have a hope installation herself. Her response to the installation forces her to change her plans dramatically, and to re-think the meaning of hope.
A TV station offers to host a town hall meeting on hope, and Luke is tempted by the chance for major exposure -- but it means they’ll have to face the Natural Hopers. Much is at stake as the outcome of this high-profile event could either be the start of a global conversation on enhanced hope – or the end of it.
This story of friendship set in the new millennium explores the thorny relationships between science and faith, placebo and cure, hope and hype. THE HOPE STORE is a soft science-fiction novel.
Thursday, December 20, 2012
1. What made you want to become a writer?
My whole life, I've been thinking up and telling stories. One day this story was just buzzing around in my head and I had to write it down. Once I started, I couldn't stop. I gave the first few chapters to a friend who is also an editor for a magazine here in L.A. and she told me I just had to finish it. So that was that, I knew I needed to be a writer.
2. What inspires your writing?
I get most of my inspiration from the people in my life and the places around me. I love to travel and incorporate quite a bit of what I experience into my writing.
3. What do you think the hardest part about writing is?
The revision process is the most difficult for me. It is hard to decide what to toss and what to keep and after reading my own work for a dozen times, it’s hard to maintain the same passion and drive that I had while writing the first draft.
4. Do you plan out what you are going to write or just let it flow?
I spend a significant amount of time early on planning and outlining. Once I have my plan in place, then I sit down and just write and let it flow.
5. What is your latest project about?
The Inadvertent Thief is about Vivien Flowers who specializes in protecting fine art and her highly structured world comes to a halt when two very special paintings are stolen. In her fierce determination to get them back, Vivien learns how to become a thief. This romantic suspense follows Vivien’s journey from Los Angeles to Paris as she learns about trust, love and the brilliance she is capable of.
6. What advice would you give to an aspiring writer?
Don't ever give up. Being a writer is a journey and not a destination so keep writing. Also make friends with and learn from other authors. Their tips can be invaluable.
7. What is on your to-read list?
Right now, I am trying to read as many indie authors as I can to spread the love and support. I am looking forward to the final installment of Karly Kirkpatrick’s Into The Shadows Trilogy. She also has a great blog that gave me some wonderful advice on epublishing.
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Friday, December 7, 2012
So this week, my book was stocked at DePaul University with textbooks and required reading for 22 film students. I had the privilege on Friday to sit in on the presentations. Jon had them break into three work groups: one presenting a movie production plan for my book as if to a big studio; one presenting as if an indie venture; and one presenting as if it would be a TV series.
There were interesting suggestions for who should direct, casting, musical score, who was the target audience, budget, locations, etc. They even talked about whether the film should get a G or R rating and which was most profitable. One team proposed teaser ads on bus shelters for the movie. Two teams used powerpoint presentations. Jon was a gentle giant as the teacher, giving them insights on what actors would be in reach or out, which composers give the most bang for their buck, which tweaks of storyline were most compelling, etc.
It was a lovely experience. I hope all novelists can experience such a thing. And hopefully Jon and I will get to work together on the real production of the movie of Prospect in 2013! Nothing is set is stone but nothing is impossible either.
The top picture above is of some of the students in the seminar. The second picture is Jon Shestack's hand as he points to his notes on the blackboard about Prospect. Earlier in the week, Mr. Shestack took me out to dinner as we chatted for 2.5 hours about my book and the movie biz and our lives. It was our first face-to-face meeting and probably won't be our last. The picture below is Jon Shestack having a martini with olives before we had our steak dinner together at Petterino's. Very Hollywood!
Thursday, September 20, 2012
NOTE: On Facebook, I shared the following post. It generated a lost of enthusiastic response so I wanted to share it in my blog too. It is a small window into the heart of one gay man in the new millennium. Mine.
I have a "virtual boyfriend." What's that? It's someone who often lives in another country but you click really well with. And though you might not ever meet, you want to feel a bit more connected. So Leon is my virtual boyfriend in Serbia. We've been VBs for a few months. I will share a bit of our correspondence today.
DWIGHT: Yes, bread is nice. Bake for me some day, Boyfriend. And feel free to call me boyfriend because i have almost never been called that. :(
LEON: hehe, I would bake bread + cook for you...you're a great guy and the best virtual boyfriend that I ever had, Boyfriend!